Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
There are two types of statements; one is people should only consider about their interest, and the other is people should reconsider their field of study about availability of job in that field, which means they should consider about their job instead of their interest. Some epigram is said ‘people are meant to be born with their talent’. Also, that is the one of the theme in this statement. Whenever they have interest with talent, that should be undeniable, and people have to follow. There can be two reasons to be followed: passion and vision.
To begin with, college students pursue only their interest and talent because they are willing to do and passionate in their work. During college study, there are various field of study and college students follow those studies. When it comes to their major field of study, they are willing to do study more and harder on their study because those are the part of their lives and those are part that they are passionate at. For example, from my experience, when I was keeping up with my major study, I really liked that I’m in biochemistry major, try to understand the mechanism, and asking a question about which that I don’t understand. This type of passion doesn’t come from any other field, some polymath people maybe do so.
Furthermore, college students make more vision for the future work in their field of study that are interested. Since they are really interested in their study and pursue as life-span goal, they will plumb and concentrate more on their study. For example, biology professors, biochemistry professors are in different field of study, but they are pursuing their goal of their research to find their interest because they have a vision to work.
Admittedly, in some circumstances of society, it requires specific field of study and to have that job achieved, people pursue which will be beneficial to their arena in the society. Society is cynical and cruel when it comes to people’s salary. They would be devastated by so called reality. In this case, people rethink rather the availability of job than their interest. However, the fact that after 10 or 20years, people who didn’t pursue their interest would regret what they did because they are not really interested in their job that they have; even they would perfunctory at their work. Therefore, they should have to follow their interest even though the reality is real.
In conclusion, general vision of the statement is college students’ vision of their field of study. If college students are really passionate in their interest and with vision, they should keep up more on their field of study not focus on the availability of jobs in that field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...During college study, there are various field of study and college students follow th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00218818381 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60380449427 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415754923414 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7942412403 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449347083167 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167206512472 0.0831039109588 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124681258399 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321153608401 0.150359130593 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794445908887 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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