Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The worth of any field of study is measured by its job prospects. This is the deciding factor for many college students before they build a career in that field. What most people fail to realize is that they cannot equate the jobs offered by a particular area of study to success. Indeed, before choosing an area of study, students should pay heed to their interests and talents than merely look at the availability of jobs in that field.
While looking at the job prospects before one chooses to make a career in a particular field might sound wise and providential, it isn’t really so. A field of study has so much to do with the interest and desire of the person seeking it than simply looking at better financial gains and recognition that would be achieved by pursuing such a field. An area of study that determines the future of a student should satiate his soul and spur curiosity. The intelligentsia that preceded our generation like Einstein, Aristotle, and Shakespeare to name a few, were never motivated by such considerations to excel in their respective fields. Hence, to make a difference and to outshine others, be it in the most popular to the most obscure field of study, curiosity and desire to imbibe the subject to the fullest matters more.
We are in a generation of freelancers. They choose the field of their interest and start working independently and in turn create jobs for others. Such freelancers and young entrepreneurs are seen budding in various corners of the world and being lauded for their efforts for trying something new or rather, finding a new way of doing something. Unfortunately, most of the educational institutions encourage students to first ensure job security before developing an interest in that area of study. Such a notion hampers the talents and innate abilities of so many people that at the end we get a mass of people working perfunctorily in high-paying jobs and dissatisfied with their lives. Freelancing, today, is a step to overcome the monotony and dissatisfaction in the lives of such people by making them work in their field of interest and at the same time keeping the ride adventurous and interesting, which is what an ideal career should be.
Doing what we love no matter how odd it is and enjoying the adventures life throws at us while working in such areas sounds good and is a powerful ingredient to motivate anyone, however it is fraught with challenges and uncertainties. No matter how interesting and fun freelancing sounds, the freelancers have no job security and could be having empty pockets on some days while floating in money on the other days. To support a family living in penury, pursuing only your own obscure interests would sound a little selfish and improvident. Nonetheless, people take risks and emerge as successful individuals, rising from the ruins and leaving others amazed and stupefied.
Any field can be made successful if there is a desire and will to study and keeping this the primary aim of the career and not merely concerning oneself with materialistic considerations. People with vision have lived a life of turmoil and adventure keeping the financial considerations to the inaccessible parts of the mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2685.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93566176471 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90215323113 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505514705882 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 843.3 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9167403181 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9047619048 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324618565454 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964729562011 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777236354015 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184524314077 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110269959321 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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