There as vast number of fields of study available to college students ranging from philosophy to artificial intelligence. The fact that professional career is important for life survival of any individual is important and associated job prospects highly influence the study decisions by the students.
In my view there should not be any fixed paradigm to the selection of area of study by college students. The situation varies from person to person. Firstly, the economic situation of family highly influence the study decisions. Availability of funds to meet college fee and other study expenses has biggest impact on field of study decision. For example, someone wants to study Artificial Intelligence from MIT and is quite capable of doing so while the family do not have sufficient funds or loans to meet the financial demands of the college hence student might have to compromise by studying somewhere else or in some other field.
Secondly, there are people who have intrinsic liking for certain subjects for example, humanities do not offer numerous high paying jobs. Still people like to study humanities subjects. Whereas there could be students who are pursuing computer science of civil engineering not because of jobs in the field but their fondness for the subject.
Thirdly, sometimes students do have to compromise on their interests due to certain personal or societal situations. For example, in most of the patriarchal societies females are not allowed to travel long distances to study or stay away from home for study. Hence, even if female students of such societies have liking for certain field of study are not permitted to pursue their choice of courses. Rather they are being forced to study and earn mere degree. This is a parallel argument against both the arguments discussed in question.
Hence in my view, there is no fixed mechanism or paradigm following which students should select the field of study. Rather the reasons for selection are more personal and situational relating to social, economical and other situations of students and his/her family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the biggest'.
Suggestion: has the biggest
...et college fee and other study expenses has biggest impact on field of study decision. For ...
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Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...tted to pursue their choice of courses. Rather they are being forced to study and earn...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...the arguments discussed in question. Hence in my view, there is no fixed mechanism...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...dents should select the field of study. Rather the reasons for selection are more pers...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, while, for example, of course, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23145400593 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67341759503 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540059347181 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7056992919 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307256114211 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100236631454 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819448480095 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17230563137 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032212101962 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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