Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
The above topic discusses about the two different basis or foundations of any education system ,namely morality and logical reasoning.To determine which one is better we need to look at through various aspects.Some may say morality is what makes us human and should be given more priority while other may state that logical reasoning works better most of the times in this real world.The picture will be more clear after going through some examples.
Firstly,it is widely known fact that moral events doesn't always govern logical reasoning. One great example to look at is the incentives given to poor people for healthcare in hospitals by various government.This actually puts financial pressure on the hospitals which seems illogical.But does that mean that we should leave those poor people who cannot afford it. No right!. Helping other is what makes us human.If morality is not taught to children from early ages,we will be producing animals or machines,but not humans.
Secondly,I would like to state that it is the morality that contributes the more to a well built society. A person helping others in need instigates a sense of morality in others as well. A very good example is actually seen in one social experiment where a landlord helps a child complete his education and later that child funds his cure from a chronic disease from his own earnings.In short,having a moral base of education,the children tends to be more helpful,considerate and contributes more towards the well being of a society.
Although,some may point that having a logical reasoning based education creates smart people who are well prepared to survive in this harsh,greedy world. They need to understand any situations logically to avoid any ramifications further.I totally agree this that both morality and logical reasoning should complement each other in taking decisions.
In conclusion,I would like to state that we cannot ignore both morality and logical resonining as one makes us human and other makes us survive this human world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2629969419 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87366761577 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547400611621 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.98441846 60.3974514979 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.1 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281541708019 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100774513778 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586835949982 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147105247399 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529202601807 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.