Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.
Everybody in his/her life wants to become successful in one or other way. Who doesn't like success? However, it doesn't not come very easily unless you are born with silver spoon or born with some kind of talent. To achieve the success one require to put great amount of efforts. No doubt it requires careful and detailed planning before executing that success plan. But before that also, one should have the risk taking capability to take that chance. No one can predict if the action plan is going to be executed will be successful or not. Therefore, it is really necessary to have risk taking capability inside the person.
Continuing with last sentence, Mahatma Gandhi never have imagined the non-violence can bring India the freedom if he had not executed his plan. There were couple of freedom fighters involved to get freedom of India from British Empire. All had their fair chances to conduct their plan. Every freedom fighter efforts have been counted till date. However, everyone knows that one which made the powerful impact was Mahatma Gandhi. It didn't happen in one go though. He didn't just think about non-violence one day and got the required outcome. He was an adamant with his careful planning about how he was going to achieve his object for the entire nation. There were couple times when his plan didn't succeed. But, he was the risk taker and because of this capability he got the result for the country which he had in his mind.
In similar way, there are plenty of businessmen in the entire world. They didn't get successful just by thinking or planning about their action plan. They had this risk capability inside them which was eventually take their cautious planning into the desired result. If it wasn't for Bill Gates, we might not have been using Windows, the most successful operating system in the world. If it weren't for Steve Jobs, we might not have the iPhone in our hand. Most people can come up with any random ideas in their mind but there are only few among them will be successful because of their guts to execute that plan, no matter what results they will get. Even if, initially the plan didn't work does not mean it will fail every time.
To sum up, it is necessary to have the detailed planning and analyses about the pros and cons of particular action plan. All these will can go in vain until it get executed by the audacious leaders, who have the capability to take risks. No matter how beautifully or diligently the action plan is created. Detailed action plan is just like cooked food. Until someone eat it nobody knows the taste of it. The same way, nobody knows the taste of success until someone take a risk.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, kind of, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67446808511 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19848192407 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482978723404 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9390099971 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8709677419 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1612903226 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41935483871 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127535527362 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346757698937 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381827127182 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810822748005 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432671140942 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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