The argument proposes a polemical policy which suggests that the salaries of teachers should be in proportion to their student’s performance. Many conducted studies has articulated the need of reforms to quintessential education system of the society. Though almost all the governments were reluctant due the potential impact on their vote bank, since it will directly influence a large section of the society. In my opinion, this is the time to act and paying teachers in accordance with the academic performance of their students should be enacted as the first step.
A deep insight into the current education system will impetus the reform process along with the hurdles to overcome. Education system is the back bone of any nation and it is the responsibility of the government to frame salutary policies without having myopic view of the picture. In our society, everyone has been awarded some form of responsibility as teacher, politicians, scientists and doctors. These responsibilities are also source of butter and bread of that specific person. It is their sole responsibility to ensure the proper functioning of the department and they are accountable for the result, be it good or bad. If other departments such as banks held their employees responsible for their actions, which leads to end result, then why not teachers?
In addition to that it has also been observed that if the policy mentioned by the author is implemented then it will directly or indirectly lead to increase in the productivity of teachers. Quality of the education will be improved and the craving to earn good salaries will exhort him to devote more time in learning the new tools to aid their teaching techniques, which will eventually reflect in the performance of the student as positive result. Consider for example, the report- published in International journal of education research- has found that since the salary of the government school teachers is fixed, irrespective of the result of the students, they are indifferent to the performance of the students. Contrary to that, in private sector run schools, it is indisputable policy to analyze the performance of the teachers which in turn feed the quality of education and continuous progress. It is after reading this journal report, I realized no wonder why all people want to send their children to private schools.
One might argue that if this policy is implemented then teachers might ask to force the same policy on every other department. While this may seem easy at first but not all the professions can be imposed with result-oriented salaries. For instance, a scientist working in a lab to find a new drug to combat might or might not succeed at the end but does that mean he is not performing his duty sincerely? No, that does not. So, there will be always such exceptions to any policy.
In conclusion, to thwart the deteriorating quality of education, one has to take the initiative to bring a change. The best approach to implement any policy is to start at a small scale and study its outcomes for further planning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...s;s performance. Many conducted studies has articulated the need of reforms to quin...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
...octors. These responsibilities are also source of butter and bread of that specific pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2586.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04093567251 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96009274134 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522417153996 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3291615308 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3181818182 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231341521721 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618723629629 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110271692894 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123463413961 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133807494243 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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