To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Finding specification of a society has always been a crucial issue in order to provide essential information for making decision in the country. Surveying just characteristics of big urban areas to estimate all of the country's society would not be efficient enough and I disagree to this approach which I will discuss my reasons now.
Due to the fact that every countries have different society, if you delve deeper into each country's society you would understand that even inside its borders you may face various people with completely different specifications. For example, they speak in different languages and accents and have various ethics, beliefs or job opportunities which all of them would affect the heterogeneous of the society. Therefor, perusing just major cities could lead to misleading funding in the results and make them useless or detriment for government and institution to make decision accordingly.
On the other hand, some may maintain that major cities and metropolitan areas have numerous immigrants from around the country thus, it is an amalgamate of different cities and remote rural areas. Therefore investigation in these cities provide good idea as a sample of the whole. In fact, I should refute this idea because immigrants would be similar to the host citizen to some extend after some while and lessen their native attributes. Apart from that some characteristic of the society in a specific area could not transfer by immigration such as behavior of people in some specific weather climate or some jobs which are specific for that area.
To sum up, I believe in order to achieve a reasonable result in surveying society just observing major cities may lead to misleading result and I strongly suggest to expand the survey to different part of the country to get supportive result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aking decision in the country. Surveying just characteristics of big urban areas ...
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...eristics of big urban areas to estimate all of the countrys society would not be efficient...
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...neous of the society. Therefor, perusing just major cities could lead to misleadi...
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...nts from around the country thus, it is an amalgamate of different cities and remote rural ar...
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...ifferent cities and remote rural areas. Therefore investigation in these cities provide g...
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... be similar to the host citizen to some extend after some while and lessen their nativ...
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Suggestion: suggest expanding
...ead to misleading result and I strongly suggest to expand the survey to different part of the cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, as to, for example, in fact, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1722972973 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85450183002 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577702702703 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9931389875 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.1 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 5.21951772744 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15056140991 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549061212958 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586642271279 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883743640562 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643764368774 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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