There are vital aspects in delivering a message. The tone and the aspect of the information plays a major role in imbibing the data. During ancient times messages used to get delivered through persons or pigeons. Even though the information creates a negative effect if the messenger presents it in a appropriate way then the receiver could absorb it in a sensual manner. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that the way the message is delivered is often cardinal than the message itself with three reasons and going through scrupulous discussions.
Firstly, the method of conveying is crucial. For instance, there can be many conflicts among two countries within a kingdom. The king might send a message through his conveyer who had presented it in an eminent manner. This might hinder the war that would happen because of the sensitivity of the information. The negative effect would evanescent and burgeon the positive vibes among them.
In addition, a boy in a teenage can get influence by various bad habits and peers. If a parent moralize him in a convincing manner instead of a harsh one the way he receives has a lot of variance. In the first one he would think that they are really concerned about his good welfare. But, In the later he might think that they are irritated with his behavior and would further carry out the same irrational things using secrecy which in turn creates an antic effect.
Furthermore, anybody in the world can preach love towards god. Then why there are particular priests or fathers to convey them ? It is the way the understand spiritualism better and put it forward to common people in an inspiring way. Many motivator's who builds the self confidence also has unique gregarious powers to change the mind of a person who is feeling low or in zeitgeist of times. Therapy would also how a beneficial effect on these people who graduates in empathizing. One can also convey the same message but the way the professional's convey creates a great effect.
To conclude, many will argue that delivering a message is important. According to me, the way of representing plays a crucial role. Even during meetings one could always deliver using only speech. They are using pictorial representations, hand movements increasing and decreasing the tone which pressing the important points plays a vital role in other person grasping it. Thus, it's always important to think of a way to deliver it better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ive effect if the messenger presents it in a appropriate way then the receiver could absorb it in a ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... effect if the messenger presents it in a appropriate way then the receiver could...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sensual manner" with adverb for "sensual"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e way then the receiver could absorb it in a sensual manner. In my opinion, I strongly agree with t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any conflicts among two countries within a kingdom. The king might send a message...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an eminent manner" with adverb for "eminent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rough his conveyer who had presented it in an eminent manner. This might hinder the war that would h...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...luence by various bad habits and peers. If a parent moralize him in a convincing m...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a convincing manner" with adverb for "convincing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...its and peers. If a parent moralize him in a convincing manner instead of a harsh one the way he recei...
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... fathers to convey them ? It is the way the understand spiritualism better and put it forward ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e way the professionals convey creates a great effect. To conclude, many will ar...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...that delivering a message is important. According to me, the way of representing plays a crucia...
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Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...portant to think of a way to deliver it better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89638554217 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71589938463 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4079412673 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.28 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266643146794 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647414134419 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934110849587 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139447553459 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117108857195 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.