The key to a scucessful demorcatic society is the open phenomenon between the authority and the public. With the proper surveilliance from the public, people can propose opinions for the governments. This modern public system has been proved efficient and operative by both devoloping countries as China, India and Developed country like the America. Proper and fluent course for suggestion from people, which benefit the whole society do not means that the government should listen everything from the public which the suggestion maybe baleful to the people of the nation. So the modern public system with congress to discuss the idea is another essential method protect the practice of democracy.
To begin with, compared with the country manipulated by dictator, it is the symbol that people can question the democratic government. Without the sound from the basement of the society, the politicians could not take mearsures properly,which may cause the abuse of power. The government could not hear from the people ,only from the observation and suggetions from officials that hardly can be exhaustive. On the other hand ,if the government prohibited the people into questioning them. it would be a symbol that the government will go to perish at short.
Another reason is the people from the society basement may offer more suggestion properly and the government should take a deep consideraion with it because any government should not ignore the power, as rather to say anger from them. Numerous stories of the rebels in the history warned us this danger. In China, lots of the shift of Dynasty were casued be the anger from people who could not bear the dictation of the Emperor, e.g. Qin dynasty, Ming dynasty and Qing dynasty are all doomed by the same reason that the course beteween the people and government.
While we are discussing the importance of the course for people to question the authority, it doesn't mean that the authority should listen to the people with the advice whatever they offered. Due to the development of the modern society which becomes more and more complicated, the congress should take the charge to discuss the essential of suggestions.
In conclusion ,I agree with the essay fundamentally, but the government should filter all these questions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., if, may, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16621983914 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70379023582 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6655483958 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4375 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189545213836 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649774935144 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393952471668 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112487215048 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472732288663 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.