Education is sometime considered as something for the youth. Some People however, consider as lifelong task. What is your opinion? Give reason and support your ideas with specific support
There is no doubt that people must receive education at school during the youth hood. Yet it is undeniable that we have agreed with some educator's viewpoint of learning is an endless business throughout life. The topic presented above is not a paradox. It is Just as an old saying in my home country—to live and to learn'.
First of all, there is reason why misleading about the education is minor people's work attributed to the weakness of compulsory educational system. Its function usually covers 2 or 3 school years from elementary (age 6) to middle school (age 14). After the completion of this stage, some of young people have to leave school instead of going to work at the farm or factory due to lack of financial support from their parents. Only a few could possibly continue to stay at school longer for pursuing their Ph.D. degree. Don't get me wrong here. It is not special case in some rural areas, because of their parents thought their child has already been to school and their responsibility for education has been fulfilled.
However, what to be taught from elementary school to college is to enrich our mind with basic knowledge and fundamental concept but not capability of understanding the whole world around us. To tackle the actual problem whatever we will encounter in real life, we learnt from the textbook at school does not help at all. There is still a long way for us if we want to go further and if we want to get the deep insight of the full landscape.
Moreover, more adult people than ever before choose to go back to school, is not accidental phenomenon. It is found out that adult people are more inclined to participate in continual education mainly for job opportunity and personal interests. Research supports the view. Introduction of the concept of sustainable development appears to lead to an indirect effect--high-quality manpower resources are in a huge demand. For those of people who are always well-prepared, even in the harsh and competitive job market, opportunity will never fail to grasp them. It is hardly to believe that one who has brilliant learning background would not be a something eve-catching for a recruiter. While, to others people, an ability to master a kind of new knowledge and skills such as e-marketing is completely personal interest.
Apparently, it should be mentioned that adult students would prefer tailor-made class and being flexible is critical issue. For example, on-job training class can equip people with practical operation skills that much easier to fit in the requirement of daily job. The process of learning will help coming up with new idea to examine the quality of the work timely. Besides that, full-time MBA educational program would be considered as an option for people who wants to refine oneself during their business life, for example leadership, communication skill and financial management, and even their income.
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Yet it is undeniable that we have agreed with some educator's viewpoint of learning is an endless business throughout life.
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