Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In ancient times, when females were more likely to be housewife, they were more responsible for growth and care of a child. But, now a days , scenario has been completely changed, mothers as well as fathers are equal responsible for taking any decisions regarding their children.
Apropos to this statement , I am in consummate accord. Mothers have presumed to take decision for conceiving a child. Consequently, they are also responsible for the financial support to the child. Moreover, in most of the families, both parents are working. Subsequently, its their duty to look after each and everything required by the child. And, they have to manage their working time along with the child care. For example, if mother is working in morning hours, then father would have to take care of their child in morning hours . And , in evening mother would look after their child. Indeed, everything is only possible they cooperate and understand each other.So, fatherhood should also ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood.
However, some people think that mother's duty is just bounded to look after their child at home and father's duty is to take care of other things such as education , finance etc. But , I totally disagree with this view. Since, we could not divide responsibilities of a child according to their convince. Indeed , they would have to absorb them with the support and encourage of each other. For example, if mother is busy in some urgent meeting and would not able to come early. so , its her husband's ought to take supervision of their child.
It is concluded from above analysis I made that equal importance should be given to both the partners. Since, if one partner is legging behind , there would not be a complete growth of a child take place.
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