The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the changes in amount of water use in the world for several sectors over a 100-year period, from 1900 to 2000. On the other hand, table gives information about water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
According to the graph, in 1900, water was used to agricultural sector, which the amount of water use was 500 km3. At the time, Industrial and domestic used a little less water. In 1900 to 1950, water use for agriculture increased steadily to 1000 km3 while water use for each industrial and domestic levelled off. In 1950 onwards, agriculture sector consumed much more wa...
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 209 200
No. of Characters: 984 1000
No. of Different Words: 89 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.708 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.527 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.688 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4