In this advanced technology era every one wants to show their expertise best to all. Good quality of work is expection from all levels of life. Some people believe that for a standred work training is a main key feature. while some people think that education is more crucial for best quality of work. this essay will explain both views before making any definate assumption.
On one side people consider training is a main key feature of any given task. According to them if some one get good training at young age it saves time and money. They think that experience makes a person perfect. For in...
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Sentence: According to them if some one get good training at young age it saves time and money.
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Sentence: Good quality of work is expection from all levels of life.
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Sentence: Some people believe that for a standred work training is a main key feature. while some people think that education is more crucial for best quality of work. this essay will explain both views before making any definate assumption.
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Sentence: on the other hand some people prefer broad based education on training for any task. according to them to learn any skill confidently some one need more basic knowledge about that task. education gives more awareness and strength to some one,s capabilities. for instance construction will be best if some one knows about mathemetics and physics well.It is seen in in developed countries like China and America education is required for all fields of work either working as a cheff or a driver.
Error: mathemetics Suggestion: mathematics
Error: cheff Suggestion: chef
Sentence: secondly,knowledge makes some one more eager to explore new techniques. in this modren age techniques are rapidly changing. so compete this rapidly progressing world some one need more standerd oh work.
Error: standerd Suggestion: standard
Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: in my opinion training and education both are part and parcel of a project. it is recommended that basic education followed by training is a good and beneficial stratgey.
Error: stratgey Suggestion: strategy
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1632 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.8 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.466 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.18 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.46 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5