Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
Work represents one of the major aspects of a person’s life. Thus, it is always deemed important to have a good balance between work and the other aspects of a person’s life, to ensure a healthy and well organized living. Yet this is not always attainable due to restrictions that may be imposed.
Examples for such restrictions might be the long distance separating the habitat and work place, which requires a lot of time to be spent on a daily basis going to and back from work. Another example could be the heavy and durable workload that –if not controllable - would usually force a per...
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