The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people claim that women’s social status has undergone remarkable changes over the last two decades, the consequent of which is the rise in, for instance, misbehavior of their children. Personally, I concede that working women are partially responsible for the wrongdoings of the youth.
To commence with, the ground of the breakthrough for women in modern society lies within the significance of education and social perceptions. In the past, gender inequality occurred in the majority of countries combined with the shortage of academic access would restrict female employment opportunities...
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