School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Contemporary, electronic devices and technologies have influenced on people more and more, especially PC computers. They have been engaged almost everywhere recently, for example at home, a university or in a school you can find it simply. It is well-known that in present time almost each school provides a library or a classroom where schoolboys can have an access to the computers and even on the internet.
Firstly, in my point of view, computers are influenced on users anyway because they have to sit in front of its display in order to deal with. As we know, PC effect on a health of man directly, particularly on their ice, concentration and behavior. So, regarding to school children they used to use a PC so as to do some such as writing, reading, listening, etc. In other side, teachers try to use lots of electronic materials that will make a study process easier for learners.
Secondly, the technics that is used by users of a computer is different from others, for example, when learners use a pen and list of paper. Furthermore, it C to use a computer because children do not need to much think about how to spell exact word even through the do not know what it is. Also, I have convinced, reading is much difficult on a screen in compare to a usual books where performance on eyes much less.
In conclusion, I think that teacher should care about their student and provide more lessons without electronic devices or a computer programs. It will decline a time that children are used by working on a PC. In addition, to make lessons without technologies develops communication skills for learners which will be helpful and useful in everyday life. Schoolboys also should interest in real books so that will help them reading faster even in case with computer devices.
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Sentence: Contemporary, electronic devices and technologies have influenced on people more and more, especially PC computers.
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Sentence: Also, I have convinced, reading is much difficult on a screen in compare to a usual books where performance on eyes much less.
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Sentence: Secondly, the technics that is used by users of a computer is different from others, for example, when learners use a pen and list of paper.
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