Some people feel that entertainers ( eg. Film stars , pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid
It is a well-known fact that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians etc earn millions of dollars forming an elite section of the society. Many believe that these entertainers are unnecessarily overpaid. I align myself with that thought as in my opinion the salaries earned by the entertainers greatly outweigh the contribution made by them to the society.
It is difficult to trace a good reason that justifies such heavy paychecks. One possible reason could be their mass appeal and influence on the greater section of the society. Entertainers tend to project a persona which appeals to a...
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Sentence: Entertainers tend to project a persona which appeals to a large proportion of population particularly youngsters who idolize them and follow their lifestyle.
Error: persona Suggestion: person
flaws:
No. of Words: 249 350
No. of Characters: 1307 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
You have the potential to get 8.0 or over, if you can write the essay around 350 words.
Those who take GRE exams can put over 500 words in 30 minutes for issue essays, while you have 40 minutes to write this essay.
More words, higher marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 249 350
No. of Characters: 1307 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.972 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.249 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.974 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.736 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5