Some people say success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important

Sentence: If in the class, there is a boy who smart and talent in physic or history subject, there will a boy who can mastered all lessons only by hard-working.
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Sentence: He may fell very dizzy and not understand about any lesson, but if he try to make effort with study hard, he can achieve an excellent grade in each subject.
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Sentence: With hard-working, people always can become the greatest human who have felt many barriers and experiences, also they could have a strong heart and stance because they knew how whole the process that they passed.
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As we live in this bewildered world, competitiveness is necessity . Therefor success is only possible when talent and hard-work go by and by. But to the contrast people with great talents get misled on the same that if one has talent there is no such thing that can not make you famous or successful.
While there is a lot possibility that people with great talents achieve great success one should never forget that, good talented people are depending on how they channelize their talents in a productive way.For an instance if someone is great with mathematics he or she will be simultaneously weaker in any other sphere of subject. However, this does not concludes that he is not talented but to achieve the aim to score well overall, he or she has to work hard towards the lagging part. Furthermore, if we talk about the most influential people in the world like Michel Jackson , he was the one who not only with his talent but determination, hard-work become what as he is still known to people as the king of pop. Despite of the fact he had certain issues with his skin and skin type he stayed focused and achieved what he aimed to.
Moreover, one should also not forget the fact that talent alone is not the only key to success , proper guidance and dedication can lead to success . As one should know that success comes with failures, we must try and try until we come to some conclusion without giving up on something.
To conclude, i totally disagree on the same agreement as talent and hard work are the factors which had to be worked together on. In addition to that timely appreciation on hard work by teachers, guiders or parents can get involved the people along to reach out their targeted goal.

As we live in this bewildered world, competitiveness is necessity . Therefor success is only possible when talent and hard-work go by and by. But to the contrast people with great talents get misled on the same that if one has talent there is no such thing that can not make you famous or successful.
While there is a lot possibility that people with great talents achieve great success one should never forget that, good talented people are depending on how they channelize their talents in a productive way.For an instance if someone is great with mathematics he or she will be simultaneously weaker in any other sphere of subject. However, this does not concludes that he is not talented but to achieve the aim to score well overall, he or she has to work hard towards the lagging part. Furthermore, if we talk about the most influential people in the world like Michel Jackson , he was the one who not only with his talent but determination, hard-work become what as he is still known to people as the king of pop. Despite of the fact he had certain issues with his skin and skin type he stayed focused and achieved what he aimed to.
Moreover, one should also not forget the fact that talent alone is not the only key to success , proper guidance and dedication can lead to success . As one should know that success comes with failures, we must try and try until we come to some conclusion without giving up on something.
To conclude, i totally disagree on the same agreement as talent and hard work are the factors which had to be worked together on. In addition to that timely appreciation on hard work by teachers, guiders or parents can get involved the people along to reach out their targeted goal.