Some people think that museums should be enjoyable place to attract and entertain young people. Other think that purpose of museums is to educate not to entertain
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, museum is a common public facilities in the city. Some people believe that museum has aim to educate people, however, the others think that museum has purpose to entertain young people. This essay would argue that museum is better to be place that could combine education and entertainment purposes.
It is true that museum has main purpose to educate young people. Museum could become the place to learn many things, especially in term of history such as culture, biology, geography and economy history. It could be an effective way to learn young generation by showing the real evidences that are related to the past time. Students could easily understand the knowledge even feel the memory in the past.
In contrary, the other people think that museum has to be an interesting place to entertain young people. Museum could become recommended place to be visited because people already been bored going to the mall, sport center or the other places. This statement is strengthened by the reason that museum would appear from social life because it could not provide what people need such as entertainment to make them more relax after facing busy day in their daily activity.
In addition, today, young people do not want to choose museum to be visited because museum is just bored place for them. There is no interesting thing that could make them enjoy. To provide all of the needs, it is better to change people’s mindset about museum by combining the education and entertainment aims. For example museum has to use sophisticated technology to tell the visitor about information in the past. By this way, visitor could feel the real moment about the past and the knowledge could be easily understood. In result, people could learn while entertaining themselves.
To sum up, museum is still one of the media to educate people. To make it more enjoyable, advance technology could be applied in the system so people could easily learn about past time even be entertained by the features.
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Some people believe that…
Some people believe that museums may become entertaining places which incite youth to relax; Others, however, hold the view that museums should only be teaching aids, while I am in favor of the former opinion. I am going to delve into both views in my essay.
On the one hand, museums are generally beautiful places with special architect styles like gothic, roman, antic, etc, that are suitable for people to visit and relax. Moreover, there are a large number of heritages of national which contribute following historical periods such as music heritages, architectural heritages, painting heritages, etc, all kinds of heritages may attract the tourist, especially oversea tourists and government can get a budget from selling ticket for those tourists. Besides, this is the best way to propagandize the Viet Nam sovereignty to the public, for example, with the Viet Nam map, we can prove the Truong Sa and Hoang Sa islands belong to Viet Nam.
On the other hand, museums are essential for education. There are a lot of things in museums that students can learn. Besides some knowledge student gets from the library, they also receive interesting knowledge from the heritages species in the museums. Furthermore, taking students to museums is visual education which is more effective compare to theory studying.
In conclusion, the government should harmony combine both kinds typicals of museums not only for the enterprise but also for education to get adequate achievements.
because museum is just bored place for them.
because museum is just a bored place for them.
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