Your computer has been repaired recently, but you are not happy with the service. Write a complaint letter and say
- What is the problem?
- How do you feel about it?
- What is your suggestion for this issue?
Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is poor repairing service, which I recently had from your service department.
I have a laptop which is model is Inspiron 5110. I bought that a couple years ago. Last week, I realized there were some malfunctions. First malfunction was a Caps Lock button did not work anymore. Secondly, CPU’s fan did not work correctly and finally my battery did not charge when I plug my charger. I explained all these malfunctions to one of your agent. I got back my repaired laptop a few days ago, but I was shocked when I turn on my laptop. Although, they fixed Caps Lock button and clean CPU’s fan, but they did not do anything about my battery. However, after working a few hours whit laptop I suddenly realized my Caps Lock did not work.
Can you imagine how I was unhappy when I found none of my problems did not fix completely. I called to your store, but they told me they did not have any responsible for this issue. I believe this matter is deserve your urgent attention. I want full refund of charge service I paid before. Besides, I would like to send my laptop again and I expect all problems are fix this time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
M. XX
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I believe this matter is deserve your urgent attention.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention.
I have a laptop which is model is Inspiron 5110.
I have a laptop with the model Inspiron 5110.
all problems are fix this time.
all problems are fixed this time.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.893 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 220 200
No. of Characters: 931 1000
No. of Different Words: 124 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.232 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.327 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.893 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.434 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4