The bar graph compares the amount of coffee and meat consumed each year by Norway, France, Germany, USA, Russia, China and Japan.

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The bar graph compares the amount of coffee and meat consumed each year by Norway, France, Germany, USA, Russia, China and Japan.

The bar graphs elucidate the amount of coffee and meat consumption in seven countries.

It is evident from the graph; the coffee was the least popular among seven countries whereas the meat was the most popular among Western countries (USA, France, Norway and Germany).

The amount of 122 kg of meat was consumed by USA citizens as the most significant compared to other countries. European countries showed the next highest meat consumption in kilograms, with outstanding data from German people ate 87 kg of meats, followed by French of 72 kg and 60 kg per Norman person. Meat consumption in Russia and China recorded similar amount of 45 and 47 kg, respectively. The lowest meat consumption was Japanese as they consumed almost a third of those of Americans.

In contrast, Norman showed the outstanding coffee intake of 9 kg and German followed closely of 7 kg per person. About 5 kg per person, 4 kg per person and 5 kg per person of meat has consumed by French, American and Russian, respectively. Chinese drank the lowest amount of coffee of 2 kg per Chinese people as observed from the graph.

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