The line graph illustrates the values of the population according to their age that were used to visit the theaters as often as they wanted in a one month period. It can be clearly seen that 15-24 years old represents the highest cinema goers among the four age groups.
Let us take a closer look at 15-24 years old movie goers, in 1984 to 1991, there was a steady increase from 15% to 33% approximately. During the same period the age group of 7-14 years old was fluctuating gradually from 10% to 14% respectively. It was followed by 23-34 age groups which were rising constantly and it ranges from 5 to 13%, at the same time reaches the same level of 7-14 years old age group. The last group from 35 years old and over was slowly climbing from 2% to 3%.
From 1992 to 1998, most of the age groups were fluctuating, while the first group reached the pinnacle of 58% in 1999, before it slumped abruptly to 50% in year 2002. It shows no trend in year 2003. However, the ages 7-14 and 23-34 years old group still keep on fluctuating immensely, the first group landed at 38% while the latter group got 35% in the year 2003.
Overall, the 35 years old and over remained the lowest as theater goers, which it only achieved 19% in 2003.
- Economic growth helps to improve the standard of living. However, some researches show that people in developing countries are happy with this trend, whilst people in developed countries are not happy about it. Explain why do you think about it? 88
- Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowladge. 73
- Some people think that children who are bought up in families without a huge amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- The graph below given information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 60
- Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, picture, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 63
The line graph illustrates the values of the population according to their age that were used to visit the theaters as often as they wanted in a one month period.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
Description: check books how to use 'which','that'.
'to their age that were used to ...'
'the 35 years old and over remained the lowest as theater goers, which it only achieved 19% in 2003.'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 230 200
No. of Characters: 966 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.2 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.211 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.733 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.677 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4