The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of people aging 65 and above in Japan,the USA and Sweden over a century.
Overall, it is clear that the life expectancy of the elderly living in the three countries is increasing with the passing years. However, more marked rise in the percentage is observed in Japan in last 10 year period.
In 1940, the proportion of elderly people living in three countries was relatively close to one another, the USA leading with 9%,Sweden 7% and Japan 5%. It was until 1998 that the highest USA figures in that year (around 14%) were surpassed by the Swedish pop...
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Hi. I want 8 band in my
Hi. I want 8 band in my writing could you please guide me where to improve.
A little bit more details
A little bit more details wanted for the US and Sweden. However, the essay is under estimated. It should be 7.5 or 8.0.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 194 200
No. of Characters: 879 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.732 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.531 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.547 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.17 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.125 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.471 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.717 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4