The bar charts demonstrate the percent of people who had personal computers in different years and also the impact of the level of education on the computer ownership is revealed. Overall, with the passage of time, people had more passion for possessing computers.
The first chart illustrates an upward trend for the amount of the folks who had computers from 2002 to 2010. In detail, in 2002, lower than 60% of people held computers and after a steady rise, this figure reached to lower than 80%, in 2010.
Moving to the second chart, the level of education was entwined with computer ownership, inasmuch as the higher the level of education was, the more people had computers. To illustrate, postgraduates ranked high among other groups with 75% and 95% computer ownership in 2002 and 2010 respectively, and it was followed by the group who had bachelor and college students and some who had diploma. Also, people who had no diploma ranked low with 15% and 40% computer ownership in 2002 and 2010 respectively.
To sum up, people's enthusiasm towards computers was fired over time and also education had something to do with computer ownership.
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