The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005

Submitted by Malita on Sat, 07/16/2016 - 07:22

The Bar Chart illustrates the approximate number of car trips made in 2005, by Male and Female drivers. The information provided is in percentage.

Overall, even though both men and women made the highest percentage of trips to work, comparatively, men made around 10% more trips than women . However, where men took more than 10% trips for recreation purpose, women took a mere 5% trips for the same.

Among men, the estimated car trips were highest for work purpose at slightly over 50%, followed by recreation and shopping at around 10%. Men made lesser trips to visit towns and attend courses (less than 10%). However the least trips were made to visit friends, banks and to run errands at around 5% approximately.

While women made the most car trips for work purposes at slightly less than 40% , shopping followed closely at a little less than 20%. Attending courses stood third at approximately 12%. This was followed by Running errands at 10% , banks and visiting friends (less than 10%). Visiting town and recreation was the least at less than 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en made around 10% more trips than women . However, where men took more than 10% t...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...wns and attend courses (less than 10%). However the least trips were made to visit frie...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... work purposes at slightly less than 40% , shopping followed closely at a little l...
^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s was followed by Running errands at 10% , banks and visiting friends (less than 1...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298165137615 0.268076937826 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.119266055046 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825688073394 0.0759168565197 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504587155963 0.0366838410393 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.151376146789 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0321100917431 0.0379272487307 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51377079181 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0183486238532 0.0210936926555 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0596330275229 0.0948980150116 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045871559633 0.00967000014798 47% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1063.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84065934066 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269230769231 0.337110787985 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21978021978 0.247514529752 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159340659341 0.171178102325 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.112407865282 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51377079181 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 44.2067776093 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5454545455 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8521334948 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.689975730869 40% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 38.5234765235 47.7609492067 81% => OK
Elegance: 2.83783783784 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285966094486 0.418131533498 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.184180855787 0.181151798455 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112617906256 0.0850326197045 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646663857102 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142559383973 0.157042692854 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139756138213 0.228904883108 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138642479798 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343130381868 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112253333287 0.0812612215331 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239895157596 0.316326947829 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187952292675 0.0921553760075 204% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en made around 10% more trips than women . However, where men took more than 10% t...
^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...wns and attend courses (less than 10%). However the least trips were made to visit frie...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... work purposes at slightly less than 40% , shopping followed closely at a little l...
^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s was followed by Running errands at 10% , banks and visiting friends (less than 1...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298165137615 0.268076937826 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.119266055046 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825688073394 0.0759168565197 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504587155963 0.0366838410393 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.151376146789 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0321100917431 0.0379272487307 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51377079181 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0183486238532 0.0210936926555 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0596330275229 0.0948980150116 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045871559633 0.00967000014798 47% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1063.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84065934066 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269230769231 0.337110787985 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21978021978 0.247514529752 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159340659341 0.171178102325 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.112407865282 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51377079181 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 44.2067776093 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5454545455 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8521334948 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.689975730869 40% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 38.5234765235 47.7609492067 81% => OK
Elegance: 2.83783783784 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285966094486 0.418131533498 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.184180855787 0.181151798455 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112617906256 0.0850326197045 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646663857102 0.706616315825 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142559383973 0.157042692854 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139756138213 0.228904883108 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138642479798 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343130381868 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112253333287 0.0812612215331 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239895157596 0.316326947829 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187952292675 0.0921553760075 204% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.