The diagram depicts how many individuals from European Union countries worked in the United States in 1999.
As an overall trend, French demonstrated the lowest point, about 5000 people made career in US. Meanwhile employees from British people were leader with working in US which was roughly 5 times more than French colleagues. In addition, the second stage was occupied by German workers in which approximately 20000 human beings have worked in US. Employees who come from Italy were in penultimate stage in which 5000 workers from Italy were employed by US in 1999. Nevertheless, overall 20000 humans from other European Union countries engaged in US in 1999.
To sum up, people who was immigrated US to work purpose show a peak rate, therefore last rate was occupied by French employees.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel and work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperature for Auckland and Christchurch, two sites in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two sites in the United Kingdom.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 84
- Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperature for Auckland and Christchurch, two sites in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two sites in the United Kingdom.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 67
- Cancel culture 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...t, about 5000 people made career in US. Meanwhile employees from British people were lead...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, second, therefore, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07633587786 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58552221435 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.95518177 43.030603864 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140549208407 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750522525932 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689030212322 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113826019637 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668962297714 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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