The graph describes the average proportion of doing exercise by both genders of Australia in 2010.
Overall, Female tended to do more regular physical activity than Male after 25 years old. While the Proportion of male doing exercise was only more than Female before 25 years old in 2010.
According to the given chart, Male just did exercise more than Female from 15 to 24 years old with 52,8%, then dramatically fell down in the next group, 25 to 34 by 42,2%. After that, Male still kept decreasing marginally to 39,5%, the lowest point in the chart before increasing continuously in 3 remaining groups and achieved almost equally with Female in the last group, 65 and over, by 46,7%.
In comparison, Female started with 47,7% in 15 to 24 group, was lower than male of the same ages. However, they increased constantly and kept higher than men in other groups; Particularly from 45 to 54 years old, women reached the peak by 53,3%, compared with men just 43,1%. Subsequently, women were witnessed slight falls in 2 next groups, just 47,1% in 65 and over age group but they were still modestly higher than male with 46,7%.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. 56
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... activity than Male after 25 years old. While the Proportion of male doing exercise w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41547553789 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0622924962 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140185354042 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656366054698 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025386899686 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079513711661 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239350750583 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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