The graph illustrates the number of male and female in Australia from the age range of 15 to 65 and over doning exercise by 2010.
In general, men seemed to take less physical activity than women by just a higher rate in 15 to 24. Whilst there were drastically advantaged figures of women who did reguar workout for the rest age groups shown. Besides, it can be viewed clearly that the tendency between male and female was in contrast.
For the first age group, it was 52.8% for male taking up activity, which was higher than 47.7% of female. Otherwise, the next two categories witnessed a signficant reduction for male with just 42.2% and then 39.5%, while it had rise ratios of 48.9% and 52.5% for other gender, respectively. Women's rate continued to keep greater percentage until the age of 65 and over. But from 45 to 54, we can see a gradual increase to reach 46.7% for man and a slight decrese for women to be 47.1% at last.
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 78
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- The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... then 39.5%, while it had rise ratios of 48.9% and 52.5% for other gender, respec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, then, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48823529412 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38165567138 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4743744809 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167532404497 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776674653718 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666713107198 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117180302198 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646975442985 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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