The graph illustrates how different sex groups with varying ages in Australia exercised on a regular basis in 2010.
Overall, there was a tendency of higher exercising degrees in Australian women. Besides, the Australians belonging to the group of 25-35 age represented the least active group.
Amongst women, the group of 45 to 54 age ranked the first in the percentage of regular physical activity at 53%, greater than that of men which showed just 52,8%. Other next prominent age groups were the age of 55 to 64 and 35 to 44 having quite similar figures with 53% and 52,5% respectively. The remainder seemed to be less interested in exercise with the lower percentages appropriately 47%, even that of 15 to 24 aged-women was lower than that of men.
The figures of male groups were largely smaller compared to female groups. Men at the age of 15 to 24 were by far the most active ones, being the only one who had the percentage over 50%. Elder men tended to do more exercise regularly, with the percentage in two groups of over 50 age at 46,7% and 45,1%, making that of the oldest group just slightly lower than that of women. Others showed some smaller figures, with the lowest amount of 39,5% in the 35 to 44 age group.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 40
- The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features an make comparisions where relevant 61
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a newcountry To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61643835616 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51874397757 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4878061823 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276331950188 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1188818634 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559321466947 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178068274342 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192202371764 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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