The bar chart illustrates how often do Australian people take part in daily exercises in the year of 2010 by different age groups. Overall, Australian female were more interested in regular exercises than the male.
In the 15-24 age groups, Australian men took the lead with 52.8 percentage, which was approximately 5 percentage higher than women (47.7%, respectively). However, in the next four age groups, the percentage of men doing exercises went down to 42% and fluctuated in the 40 to 45 % range. Meanwhile, women started to rise gradually. The most striking figure was that 53.3 percentage of Australian female engaged in regular physical activity in the 45-54 age group. Both genders remained at 47 percentage in the last age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 620.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12396694215 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85970438406 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5592573389 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368549908796 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147372755063 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701155114491 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258754296338 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431916388662 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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