The survey conducted at a workplace between the two age groups 18-30 and 45-60 resulted in a chart that provides information about the intensity to which the two category of workers are being affected by the factors hindering their performance at work.
Overall, the younger category is much affected by the opportunities for self development, comfortable working environment and performance appraisal. The Elder category is the less affected compared to the other group with having their concerns about the salary they receive.
The youthful community of the company seems to lag in the chances for life skill improvement with a majority of 90 persons having the same opinion. Around 80 persons have claimed that the facilities provided at the workplace,promotions and appraisal, salary have been the vital factors to affect their level of performance. They seem to least bother about few other factors like the respect from others,job security and the work environment.
The Elderly community primarily faces monetary issues with around 70 persons opinionating the same. The other criterias like Team spirit, competent boss, promotion aspects and job satisfaction have been the secondary concern with around 50 persons. The other factors are influencing both the youth and the elderly negligibly.
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men an 60
- quot In any enterprise the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product quot Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above Support your point of view with reasons and or 50
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company The survey was carried out on two groups of workers those aged from 18 30 and those aged 45 60 and shows factors affecting their work performance 92
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to add 50
- This chart shows the top eight honeymoon destinations for newlywed British couples in 2010 The results come from a survey of 5 000 couples 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , promotions
...the facilities provided at the workplace,promotions and appraisal, salary have been the vit...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the least'.
Suggestion: to the least
...t their level of performance. They seem to least bother about few other factors like the...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , job
...her factors like the respect from others,job security and the work environment. The...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...condary concern with around 50 persons. The other factors are influencing both the ...
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Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h the youth and the elderly negligibly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4776119403 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96220092013 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6048550278 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222595322604 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853067309704 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124967269314 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15698996551 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161621903082 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.