The bar chart illustrates the first ten countries in producing and using electricity in 2014. The graph is divided into 2 colors which is named production and consumption in billion kWh.
At first, in almost all of top ten countries in producing electricity, the usage of the electric is lower the its production excluding Germany that its consumption is higher that production.
Furthermore, Chine and the United States are producing and using far more than other 8 countries by about 5 and 4 times higher production respectively.
On the other hand, the gap between production and consumption among mentioned countries are vary. For instance, the negligible differences are in Korea and Russia, whereas variation of production and consumption in the United States, India and Canada are clearly obvious.
In brief, Chine and the USA are the major sources of producing electricity, however other countries are nearly similar in producing and consuming the electricity which is used in those countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... is named production and consumption in billion kWh. At first, in almost all of top ...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...ity, the usage of the electric is lower the its production excluding Germany that its c...
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Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...nsumption among mentioned countries are vary. For instance, the negligible differenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38993710692 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01758358424 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3258924334 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.23603664747 277% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212131728775 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113950808789 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681523423506 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119411568074 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649750056677 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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