The bar graph depicts the information about taking part in various games likewise, Tennis, Cycling, Baseball, volleyball, Swimming, Ice hockey, Golf, and many more by Canadian citizens in the years 1998 and 2005.
To begin with, the most popular sport in Canada is golf because above 20% of people are participating in this game. It obtains the highest rates in both years. Although the baseball game was extremely famous among the people in the year 1998 and it got about 17% rating, in 2005 the rating of baseball game just 6% it is immensely less ratio rather than first year. Ice hockey is extremely popular in the whole time period and in both years it obtains nearby 17%, it is the second-highest rating.
Moreover, four games get a similar ratio of participation in Canada. These four games are tennis, cycling, volleyball and alpine skiing. In the years 1998 and 2005 this all sports get a rating in between 5% to 10%. In the swimming 14% people participating in the first year and in next year 10% people take part in this game in next year.
To conclude, people give more preference to golf, ice hockey and swimming in a couple of years. Apart from this, tennis, cycling and other game are less popular among the participants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, moreover, second, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48905353843 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4825039717 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111161725682 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514494605663 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504743284233 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696216138687 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403800276533 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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