The stipulated diagram illustrates UK emigrants preferred locations during a period of four years, from 2004 to 2007. The mentioned parameters are Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA and France.
It has been clear from the data that, Australia was the favorite relocation place for english people. In 2004 over 40,000 british were moved to Australia and the trend continued throughout the mentioned period. There was a mere decline of 2000 in 2005, but it was peaked in the next year with 52,000 migrations. Spain was the second most popular destination for British people. The movement to Spain was showed almost the same numbers during 2004 and 2005, which was 35,000 each.
Whereas, only few British preferred countries like New Zealand, USA and France as their migration option. New Zealand received over 20,000 UK migrants in each year from 2004 to 2007. One impotent point to be note that, there was a sudden increase of movement to France from UK in 2005, the numbers were topped at 33000 during that year. Interestingly, just after two yers of time the migration to France was dropped to below 20,000.
In conclusion, it is evident from the chart that Australia and Spain were the most famous location among UK migrants. Having said that, a fair amount British were also interested in countries like New Zealand, USA and France.
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishme 61
- It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society 68
- The pie charts compare the percentage of carbohydrates, protein and fat with three different diet programs. 73
- the table below compares the average number of vehicles using 3 roads 87
- Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00446428571 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47348422328 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3887655076 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2307692308 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854071984535 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359613289537 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341267632602 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571155341162 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166423553408 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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