The bar chart illustrates the scores of three teams over four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005.
Overall, team B won the most scores over the span of time. Meanwhile, team A and team C showed a mediocre performance.
Team B was the best compared to the other two teams during the period. It accumulated 82 points in the season of 2002; whilst, team A and team C merely scored 5 points and 10 points respectively. It was likewise impressively outstanding in the season of 2003 and 2005. By contrast, the season of 2004 was the bottom of its record.
Team C was the inferior team of the three. It was rewarded 15 points for the season of 2003, which was the peak record. In addition, team C scored 5 points in the season of 2005, that was the worst season. By comparison, team A accumulateed 35 points in the season of 2004, which was the best performance. The other season were medeocre performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005. Overall, team B won the most scores over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56707317073 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71737173777 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 23.4181494192 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4166666667 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163943514157 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813959531542 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656161696753 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14626685896 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669564853646 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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