The figure gives information about electricity production and consumption for ten countries in 2014. Overall, China produced and consumed large amounts of electricity compared to the others. In contrast, Korea ranked last.
The bar chart illustrates that China, by 5398 billion kWh electricity production, ranked first. Meanwhile, by a narrow margin, the United States by 4099 billion kWh stood at second position. There was a dramatic decrease in electricity production between remain countries and the first two producers. Russia and Japan produced 1057 and 936 billion kWh of electricity in 2014 and became the third and fourth producers, respectively. Whereas Korea, by 485.1 billion kWh, was the minor producer.
Meanwhile, China and the US were the most significant electricity consumer by 5322 and 3866 billion kWh, respectively. The trend of electricity consumption is similar to its production and Russia with a substantial drop, in comparison to the Us and China, by 1038 billion kWh ranked third. Korean consumers used the last amount of electricity by 449.5 billion kWh, which was slightly smaller than Brazil, Canada, and France.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49152542373 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92827643816 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4480180472 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180046630651 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811778040559 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104607354441 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148381986578 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727805672525 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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