The given column graphs provide an overview of the marriage and divorce statistics, which have taken place in the eight countries during two distinct years 1981 and 1994.
It can be clearly observed in the first bar chart that in the year 1981, the count of marriages in the USA was higher than other countries, it was more than per 10 thousand people; after 13 years, the least marriages were in the five countries namely: UK, Finland, Germany, France, and Italy, which accounted for less than per 6 thousand people.
Turning to the second bar chart, in 1981, the highest rate of divorce that was in the USA and UK, over per 3 thousand people, and further, during the year 1994, again the US A and UK were at top in this rate, accounting for more than per 3 thousand people; Italy had the lowest divorce rate among all the countries.
Overall, only Denmark followed a rising trend in the figure of marriages, whereas in the divorce statistics, the USA and Denmark started declining over the period.
- The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults’ work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...it was more than per 10 thousand people; after 13 years, the least marriages were...
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...ed for less than per 6 thousand people. Turning to the second bar chart, in 1981...
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...ople, and further, during the year 1994, again the US A and UK were at top in th...
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...ng the year 1994, again the US A and UK were at top in this rate, accounting for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68926553672 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3278344529 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.171509545 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.5 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.25 22.9334400587 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170834123569 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992598125826 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454331355698 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992598125826 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454331355698 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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