The bar graph below depicts information about the average hours of unpaid
work* per week done by people in different categories.
The information about married men and women spending hours on unpaid work per week, according to numbers of children is depicted by the graph.
Overall, it is immediately apparent that women are relatively superior on spending hours over men for doing such unpaid job activities as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening.
Regarding men activities, Both men with no children and men two children, we can see, there are similar figures for doing unpaid activities, with around 19 and 18 hours each. Meanwhile, only 17 hours, the unpaid work is done by men who have over three children, a much lower than other men categories.
Moving to married women activities, most hours have spent by women with more than three children to do unpaid activities, accounting for approximately 58 hours. It is, then, followed by women with a maximum two children noted at 51 hours, which is the second highest of the figure shown. Finally, we see that only 30 hours, women with no children spending on unpaid activities.
- Playing a musical instrument is one of the most important achievements forany child. To what extent do you agree with this statement. 61
- The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health andEducation in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also InfantMortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992. 89
- Playing a musical instrument is one of the most important achievements forany child. To what extent do you agree with this statement. 61
- The bar graph below depicts information about the average hours of unpaidwork* per week done by people in different categories. 73
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in publicbuildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages anddisadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... around 19 and 18 hours each. Meanwhile, only 17 hours, the unpaid work is done b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, regarding, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67385133634 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5373641994 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970538447536 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618671510681 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096848403373 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965418884411 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114897878341 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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