The given bar chart provides information about the proportions of male, female and children who consumed five serving of fruits and vegetables per day in Britain from the year 2001 to 2008.
Looking at the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the maximum quantity of fits and vegetables had been eaten by females than others over a period.
Having a glimpse at the illustration reveals that the percentage of women who are fruits and vegetables was 20 percents in the gear 2001. Ahead of this, the figure steadily increased and reached 40 percents in the year 2006, before falling slightly in the latter year.
Shifting to the remaining data, the figure for men and children remained constant from the year 2001 to 2003 accounted as 16 percents and 13 percents respectively. The number of men who are vegetables and fruits was 20 percents as compared to children just only 17 percents in the year 2004. The figure for men and children were comparably high in the year 2008.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...on reveals that the percentage of women who are fruits and vegetables was 20 percents i...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...percents respectively The number of men who are vegetables and fruits was 20 percents a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78106508876 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58129270353 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 169.0 22.4926829268 751% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 808.0 112.824112599 716% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 169.0 22.9334400587 737% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221091520284 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221091520284 0.103423049105 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145548002159 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118402490551 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 85.6 13.2329268293 647% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -83.14 61.2550243902 -136% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 66.8 10.3012195122 648% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.66 8.06136585366 194% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.4329268293 490% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 69.6 10.9970731707 633% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 11.0658536585 506% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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