The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents
The illustrated bar chart provides information about how much time children spare with their mothers and fathers across five age ranges.
As can be seen from the chart, children spend most time with their moms on weekdays. The amount of this time fluctuates between 4.4 and 5.8 hours among all ages. In contrast, children just spend 1 to more than 2 hours with their dads. Both dads and moms are with the kids for 1 to 2 hours on weekdays.
A more detailed look into the bar chart reveals that on the weekends, children spend a considerable amount of time with their parents. The family is all together for more than 5 hours during weekends. However, kids spare considerably lower hours with their dad which is less than 2 hours across all age groups. Besides, children stay with their moms for 2 to 4 hours on the weekends.
In conclusion, children seem to spend more hours with their parents on the weekends in consideration to weekdays. Children aged 4-5 spend the highest amount of time with moms and dads on the weekends while kids aged 8-9 take the first positions on weekdays.
- Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems What are the problems What could be done to solve those problems 73
- Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems What are the problems What could be done to solve those problems 78
- Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together Discuss both views and state your own opinion 78
- Some people store personal and private information online including banking contacts and addresses Is it a positive or negative trend 84
- The illustration shows information about how igloo is built from snow 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, look, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66145833333 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42463999869 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.998717555 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411754370646 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187877156092 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111293741515 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2892467922 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334182906737 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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