The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people in Malaysia and Singapore attempt to study science at different levels of education, for example Masters of Science, Bachelor of science etc.
People in Malaysia and Singapore tend to not like to study science at a very similar ratio, that is 65% in
Malaysia and 60% in Singapore. The percentage of people in school leaving exam is slightly higher in Malaysia (35%) than in Singapore(30%).
On the other hand there is very significant difference in the percentage of people holding Bachelor level between two countries, while the number is 10% in Malaysia and just the double of the percentage of Malaysia is in Singapore.
Finally there is very small amount of people and equivalent percentage who have studied Masters in science in both the countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Finally,
...centage of Malaysia is in Singapore. Finally there is very small amount of people an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82310552619 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0391138055 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111464186634 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068604255784 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024097213815 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696597794329 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250785931964 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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