The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by mahabub on Thu, 10/12/2017 - 14:04

The bar chart illustrates someland’s main exports three different products in the years 2005, 2015 and projected for 2025.

Overall, dairy products is the highest export products in someland’s nowadays but in future it will go down, international truism take over and got the highest amount of money. It is clear that over the time meat products exports will be decreased than 2005 level.

According to the bar chat, international tourism was the highest point at 2005 it got almost 6.2 billion USD. Over the time it increases in 2015 it was approximately 6.8 billion and in future it will be raised at almost 8 billion USD. But dairy products was climbed most in 2005 to 2015 almost 3 billion, in 2005 it was 5 billion and 2015 it was almost 8 billion, but in 2025 it will be reduced a little (approximately 0.5 billion).

In the case of meat products, it declined over the time period in 2005 it was 4 billion and it decreased chronologically in 2015 it was 3.5 billion, in future 2015 it will be 3 billion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69613259669 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8721843491 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447513812155 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4911511659 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159274351617 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101852533615 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103763132721 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145683690096 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119610719813 0.0819641961636 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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