The bar graph illustrates the performances of the Someland's main exports of the three sectors in the years 2005, 2015 and 2025. We can see that, the International tourism exported has the most significance in 2025, whereas in comparison, meat products has the lowest value of money in the same year.
It is noticeable that the sale of Dairy products and International tourism exported were similar in 2015 and 2025 respectively, reached to $ 7.9 billion, however in 2025, the sale of dairy products dropped 7.6 billion. What is remarkable is the sale of meat products slightly decreased to $ 3 billion across the twenty years. In contrast, the exported of International tourism was strikingly higher in 2025 than the other exported in the corresponds years. Likewise, it is worth to mention that the experts are predicated that the International tourism will continue to grow in the future. On the other hand, sales of meat products are consider as the least exported and will remained below in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$7'.
Suggestion: $7
... 2015 and 2025 respectively, reached to $ 7.9 billion, however in 2025, the sale of...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
... of meat products slightly decreased to $ 3 billion across the twenty years. In con...
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Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... other hand, sales of meat products are consider as the least exported and will remained...
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Line 3, column 677, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...consider as the least exported and will remained below in the future.
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and will remained below in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, whereas, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04790419162 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88397049384 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0702262883 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136163249348 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704602017947 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637428607344 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123680992672 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434202616767 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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