The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20*..,and future projections for 2025.
(20*..:for test purposes, use and refer to the current year)
The bar chart below demonstrates the main three exported items in the area of southland in a years 2000, 2015 and the future expectations in 2025. Overall, it can be seen that, the export of dairy product and international tourism are gaining large profits in the period given, while the meat products are exported at lower rates.
To begin, the international tourism stood at just over 8 billion sterling in 2000, then in 2015 it increases by about one billion sterling, and the expectations for the year 2025, it will rises to reach approximately 10 billion sterling. For the dairy products it st...
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...and the expectation for
...and the expectation for international tourism in 2025 to rises to about 10 billion sterling.
and the expectations for the year 2025, it will rises to reach approximately 10 billion sterling.
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it increased sharply to peak at just under 10 billion sterling in 2015 which the largest amount among all three prodducts
it increased sharply to peak at just under 10 billion sterling in 2015 which is the largest amount among all three products
it clear that it shows a declining trend
it is clear that it shows a declining trend
Sentence: For the dairy products it started the period with 7 billion sterling in 2000, after that it increased sharply to peak at just under 10 billion sterling in 2015 which the largest amount among all three prodducts, and expected to lose about the half of this amount in the next 10 years.
Error: prodducts Suggestion: products
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