The provided bar chart compares the proportion of the British people donating to charity in 1990 and in 2010. The surveyed people are grouped according to their age.
Overall, a significant decrease in the proportion of the youngest Brits donating to charity was noted, while the middle-age groups suffered a moderate decline. However, the Older Brits (51 to over 65) were more likely to do donate in 2010 than 20 years earlier.
A closer look at the data reveals that in 1990, British citizens between 36 and 50 years old were the group with the highest proportion of charitable donations (over 40%). However, the youngest Brits (18-25) were the least likely to give money to charity, with just little over 15% of the people from this group reporting donations in 1990. All the other age groups were in the 30%-35% percent range.
In 2010, more mature-aged citizens were the biggest benefactors, with 40% rate in the age group 51-65. Elderly people (over 65) were at 35%, which is the same value as for the middle aged people (36-50), who used to be the most generous group some twenty years ago. The biggest drop was marked within the youngest Brits, were only 5% reported giving to charity, which is the lowest value in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77464788732 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30935335506 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5097519123 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.7 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190998754933 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881859032488 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457073703907 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134352650831 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491278048574 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.