The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 will projection till 2050

The information above the percentage of whole world population in four verious nations between 1950 to 2000 is depicted by the rendered in bar chart. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
Overall, it would be vividly manifested that the highest population was in China however by the end of period it would become India.
To begin, the highest portion of population in the world which was china in 1950, It accounted for 25%. Whereas the following 5 decades, there was a slight decrease observed in the portion of population which was 23% and in 2050, it would be 19%. There had been a dramatic increase manifested in the percentage of population in India which was 15% in 1950 and 19% in 2000. But 21% will be study in 2050.
Moreover, in 1950, the percentage of population in USA was 10%. A slight fall in the portion of population was 8% and in 2050, it will be measure as same in past 5 decades. Japan was least portion of population in the whole world, which was under 5% during all this span.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the least'.
Suggestion: was the least
...easure as same in past 5 decades. Japan was least portion of population in the whole worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54395604396 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58214284253 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2480572768 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265089363258 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123754017752 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087231457556 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175116845422 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927967219665 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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