The given bar chart illustrates the information about money,which was spent on divergent junk foods in per week in Britain during 1990 and the provided line graph gives an insight of per person fast good consumption in several years from 1970 to 1990.
First of all,the high income class people spent a more than 40 pence on Hamburger but their disbursement was approximately constant on Fish&Chips and Pizza.However, the middle category people were topmost in the outlay of Fish&chips among all the groups.Finally,the very small sums of money was spent by low class British citizens on Pizza.Whereas,the much more priority was given by them to spent near about 15 pence on other fast food items such as Hamburger and Fish&ships.
Furthermore,in 1970 ,the British Citizens consumed Pizza more than other two items and the consumption of Pizza was 300 gram per person but it plunged to 200 grams in 1980 and in other consistent years from 1985 to 1990,the usage of this food was familiar.In the comparison of Hamburger and Fish&Chips,the Hamburger became less popular in people while Fish&Chips were more prefered by masses in all the years from 1970 to 1990.
Overall,it indicates that in 1990,the favorite food was Hamburger and the fast food item Fish&Chips were most popular during the period of 20 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, whereas, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12037037037 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9592424558 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.488442892 43.030603864 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.5 112.824112599 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 5.23603664747 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127591925002 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10061520243 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08101913752 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10061520243 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08101913752 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.2329268293 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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