The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the level of annual income of doctors and other worker in seven different countries in 2004
Overall the amount of salaries doctors earned were much higher compared to other jobs in all seven nations. Another interesting point is that the US is the country paid the highest wages for employees as well as doctors.
Looking at details, in 2004 both Switzerland and France ranked at the second place in the amount of money doctors in these countries earned every year, at 70 thousands of dollars, while this figures for other workers had a remarkable difference, at 40 thousands of dollars and 30 thousands of dollars, respectively. Similarly, meanwhile the salary paid for doctors in the US reached 120 thousands of dollars, worker in this country just earned nearly one third of that amount of money, at 45 thousands of dollars, a dramatic change.
On the other hand, other workers three countries Germany, Czech and Italy had the same level of income, at 20 thousands of dollars and this figures for doctors also were similar at above 60 thousands of dollars. Finally, Finland stood the bottom with 45 thousands of dollars for doctors and a half of this figure for other workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '70 thousand'.
Suggestion: 70 thousand
...n these countries earned every year, at 70 thousands of dollars, while this figures for other w...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...year, at 70 thousands of dollars, while this figures for other workers had a remarka...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '40 thousand'.
Suggestion: 40 thousand
...workers had a remarkable difference, at 40 thousands of dollars and 30 thousands of dollars, re...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 thousand'.
Suggestion: 30 thousand
...ference, at 40 thousands of dollars and 30 thousands of dollars, respectively. Similarly, meanw...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '120 thousand'.
Suggestion: 120 thousand
...lary paid for doctors in the US reached 120 thousands of dollars, worker in this country just ea...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '45 thousand'.
Suggestion: 45 thousand
...y one third of that amount of money, at 45 thousands of dollars, a dramatic change. On the oth...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 thousand'.
Suggestion: 20 thousand
... Italy had the same level of income, at 20 thousands of dollars and this figures for doctors al...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '60 thousand'.
Suggestion: 60 thousand
... for doctors also were similar at above 60 thousands of dollars. Finally, Finland stood the bot...
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '45 thousand'.
Suggestion: 45 thousand
... Finally, Finland stood the bottom with 45 thousands of dollars for doctors and a half of this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, second, similarly, so, third, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91219512195 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54395739248 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0203271186 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.833333333 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1666666667 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 5.23603664747 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394933692845 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214605290697 0.103423049105 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534419182442 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262768273148 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060731161506 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.