The bar chart gives information about the number of hours that married males and females work daily in paid and unpaid employment.
Overall, wives tend to spend a greater amount of time on unpaid work at home than husbands in both age categories. It is also noticeable the younger age cohort works more hours than the older ones.
Regarding paid employment, the average married 24- to 44-year-olds work roughly 7 hours per day while their spouses work around 5 hours. The same pattern can be seen in the senior category, with the average hours worked per day by men was an hour more than that for women. By contrast, the number of hours spent on at-home unpaid work by wives was almost twice more than that for their husbands in both categories.
Moreover, married men aged from 24 to 44 are more active in employment than those aged from 45 to 64, with the total hours worked by the former was approximately 2 hours more than for the latter. The amount of time spent by women in employment was roughly the same in the two age groups.
- Some say that children should obey their parents and teachers while others believe that too much control will not help to prepare children for their adult life Discuss both sides of the views 89
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Advantages and disadvantages of overseas studying 78
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. 84
- The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia at present and in future. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60427807487 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33628034265 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.511536414 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239499988664 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122616498686 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904806889352 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16162241371 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875315875002 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.