These three pie charts illustrate the percentages of three main nutrients that are usually consumed by USA people. Those nutrients are Sodium, Saturated Fat, and Added Sugar.
The first one is Sodium, where it is mostly consumed during Dinner, with 43% proportion. Following Dinner, Sodium is often found in Lunch with 29% proportion. After Lunch, USA people usually add Sodium in their Breakfast and Lunch meals, with tied proportions, 14%.
After that, we can see that the largest proportion for Saturated Fat is usually contained in Dinner food, with 37% proportion. After that, 26% Saturated Fat is often consumed during Lunch. The Saturated Fat proportion then fall slightly into 21%, in Lunch. The last is Breakfast, with only 16% proportion of Saturated Fat in USA people's food.
The last is Added Sugar, which is mostly contained in Snacks, with 42% proportion. Then, the number fall almost a half to 23% in Dinner. Following Dinner, 19% Added Sugar is often found in Lunch. The proportion then fall slightly into 16% in Breakfast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed in Dinner food, with 37% proportion. After that, 26% Saturated Fat is often consum...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13450292398 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53892779974 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0422816918 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5384615385 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386789938915 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158905622278 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376807075079 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341181820108 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417298533766 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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